Friday, June 5, 2009

Goodbye Never Looked So Good Comments

Rating: 5.0

Goodbye never looked so good,
Never looked so tempting.
Though I couldn't say it.
I can't let him go and start to hate me.
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Melanie Weeks
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james Xane 07 June 2009

Sad, strong, slightly desperate feel from the words you've used... a good poem at the same time... A straightforward expression of feelings and that's what makes it a lovable read... Keep writing.

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