Friday, May 22, 2015

Goodbye My Son Comments

Rating: 5.0

You came into this world with a healthy, lustrous cry
This wonder of a little boy, my handsome little guy
This love I had for you as I nursed you at my breast
Filled my heart to overflow as I held you to my chest.
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Grace Burke
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Kim Barney 05 June 2015

No matter that you didn't actually have a son that died, you did a great jog creating the poem anyway. It was very convincing. My mother's name was Grace.

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Allotey Abossey 04 June 2015

This's very sweet, excellent flow of diction. God bless you

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Alesia Leach 22 May 2015

A very touching poem and your verses flowed beautifully.

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Godfrey Morris 22 May 2015

A very touching write. We must give great honour and appreciation for those who have sacrifices so others may live. Lovely poem thanks for sharing.

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