Goodbye...My Love Comments

i love this poem its great i can really relate to it... its so deep and it captures the reader.. even for people that have no intrest in poetry if they read this poem they feel lyk there thier this peom is very kool and i like it alot!

love the last line adds depth. not that it needed depth or anything i just like it. Great poem. Lylyanna

wow thats sad thank s for the comment

Its very sad, but also very good.

lovely, now who's gonna clear up the mess, your Mum?

I love this poem, it's really good! Alisha

i love the direct style of this poem, good work. Holly xox

Nice poem Joshua! ; D i liked it alot! check out mine sometime! ! !