Goodbye my love, I so adore,
with my heart and soul and more….
Days and hours are getting closer
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From your poet's note it is clear that God's grace is most important. For him you were narrowly escaped from the bombing by the terrorists in Paris on 12th November,2015. This poem is delineated as lamentation astutely and incisively. I quote....... my being stays here, but my soul travels with thee, I bet thy love so passionate I won´t ever forget, and please, do not forget me for without thee, life is not the same, but If that happens, who is to blame….? Beautiful poem. Thanks.10
A beautiful poem of love lovingly penned. So touching and heartwarming. All lines of this spellbinding write are elegantly crafted. Thanks for sharing, Sylvia.10+++++
Days and hours are getting closer these gardens would soon be sans flowers falling leaves of exuberant colours fill´d the path of our sweet goodbye...............thought provoking....pulsating poetic expression dear Sylvia! (10)
Thank you so much, dear Poet, your comment and feed back represents the value and worth this poem ought to deserve as it must, I am thankful to you endlessly, Dillip. Thank you too for the 10.. GBU!
A perfect love poem. In a class by itself! Marvelous work, Sylvia Frances!
Thank you Practicing Poetess (what a cute name!) .for your sympathetic visit and your wonderful comment.
why saying an adieu while your being stays here?