Goodbye, My Love Comments

taking steps... foot by foot by foot, slower than a run, yet faster than a turtle, closer and closer towards your oblivion... Into mysterious unconsciousness, .... very nice mysterious poem..... thinking of your sister and praying for her.

Love and pain! ! ! 'In poor health '. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

After the snowfall but before the lily blossoms, you were this woman who left by choice, all natural decisions made from a place of despair, darkness consumed you as you fell into an addiction with expressions of deep sorrow and remorse... After the spring but before the leaves, I found you drained of energy, completely exhausted into nothingness, and through it all, you still loved me... After the sun but before the rain, You tore out the pages from your favorite book, You wrote it at such a tender age, Too young to understand, yet too old to make believe, After the hot sunshine, but before the icicles started reflecting prisms of rainbows, I was this woman in poor health. After blue clouds but before the kingdom, she was absolutely glowing in luminescence. I had waited five years for this exact moment. These are magnificent and are full of aesthetics.. You are going to be one of the greatest poet of our age. Thanks for this poem. You deserve 10+++ for it.

closer and closer towards your oblivion... Into mysterious unconsciousness, I whispered............ a sad story but very poetically concieved and expressed.... understand your pain and thinking. i wonder about your audacity, your courage and your determination of life to carry on with such memories........ thank you dear poetess. tony. like ur poem very very much. you are a real poetess.t ony

I FIRST LOVE you say good bye.. he try to skip you and you don't want to disturb him.. pure love will fall on you don't go behind things.. 2 pure love fall on you but god did't allow you yo live sweet heavenly bliss.. because god want good people good i enjoy with pain.. thank you Hello, my love, as I walked her way..