Wednesday, August 1, 2012

Goodbye Lullaby Comments

Rating: 2.2

With our heart in a fierce beat,
We'll dance together on the empty street.
With your shallow breathing against my head,
We'll sway along to words unsaid.
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Imti Longchar 06 August 2012

Hi Good to see you writing... its really emotional to read your writing.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 02 August 2012

What to write about this lullaby? moreover Goodbye Lullaby! the last two lines are too catchy, Emo.

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