Thursday, September 21, 2006

Goodbye Horses. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Come back.
I wave to the bus
dripping with sky.
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Mary X
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Poetry Hound 21 September 2006

'a wave is just a palm. You go away with your legs and your thoughts.' That's the strongest part of the poem because it's a fresh point of view. Very creative.

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Mary X

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