Wednesday, April 25, 2007

Goodbye, Grandpa Comments

Rating: 5.0

With my dreams shattered,
I start to cry,
I don’t know why you had to die,
I loved your smile,
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Troy Clark And Neal Simons
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Chloe Mishler 18 May 2007

I love this poem. I lost my beloved grandfather this year on my 16th birthday. I still haven't gotten over the loss. This poem fits my experience almost perfectly. Thank you for writing such a meaningful and amazing poem.

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Etebom Ekpo 25 April 2007

I felt the way you fell when i lost my granma 2005, to make things worst, i did not have the chance to tell her goodbye, but you do. Its a nice poem, what i'll prefer to call a natural self expression. Etebom

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Jim Foulk 25 April 2007

this piece of wonderful poetry you wrote, it really a heart felt tribute to your grandfather. I lost my grandfather in 1970 and my grandma in 1969 and it does hurt, you never forget them. this poem really showed how you felt, you wrote it very well.

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