Wednesday, September 11, 2024

Goodbye, Former Friend Comments

Rating: 5.0

Goodbye, my former friend;
I fear this is the end.
I thought if you were wise,
you would apologize.
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Belle Wassermeister
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LeeAnn Azzopardi 05 October 2024

I wrote something like this I got it published in England Bravo! ! ! !

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Rebecca Navarre 05 October 2024

Again Excellently expressed! .. Endless 10'S And Stars! ..+++++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 05 October 2024

It can take me along time too, to finally see the truth. I think many can relate to this...

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Nosheen Irfan 21 September 2024

Sometimes I wonder why relationships are so ephemeral but then isn't life itself so transient? Sad reality!

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Belle Wassermeister 25 September 2024

Nosheen, thank you so much for your kind comment.

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Savita Tyagi 11 September 2024

Remorse and Forgiveness both are prized virtues. But most of us hesitate to develop and use.

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Savita Tyagi 11 September 2024

Showing remorse and Forgiveness both are virtues that most of us hesitate in developing.

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Belle Wassermeister 17 September 2024

Savita, thank you for your multiple, wise comments.

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D.N. Rebb 11 September 2024

Wow! This seems really personal. Hope he or she gets to read the poem.

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Belle Wassermeister 17 September 2024

Oh, he has read it, all right. He even added this poem to his favorites, but says that he will not apologize. Thank you, D. N., for the comment.

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Cowboy Ron Williams 11 September 2024

Excellent work! I laughed out loud at the implied, unfinished rhyme at the end. To my favorites and five stars!

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Belle Wassermeister 17 September 2024

Dear Ron, thank you. Did you know that HE also added this poem to HIS favorites? Yet he will not apologize.

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Richard Wlodarski 11 September 2024

Sorry that you have to go through this, Belle. I too have lost some friends for no apparent justifiable reason. That's when it hurts the most! Excellent poem!

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Belle Wassermeister 17 September 2024

Thanks very much, Richard. I consider YOU a good friend of mine, and hope you think the same of me,

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