Tuesday, December 9, 2008

Goodbye Forever Comments

Rating: 5.0

I can't go near you
Let me stay right here
Away from you
Where everything is clear
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Sonya Florentino
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Patti Masterman 17 August 2009

Perfectly captured, the feeling of something delicious..that will definitely wound you every time. You gotta love those rhymes..

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Laurie Hill 11 April 2009

Such a sad, wistful write Sonya............lovely..10

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Kate Warner 09 December 2008

This is beautiful, very simplistic, with very good use of words :)

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Sonya Florentino

Sonya Florentino

Manila, Philippines (residing NYC)
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