Tuesday, August 22, 2017

Goodbye Child Comments

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I stared at her nails
As i gave her away
I felt a loneliness
Underneath my breast
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Mark Otieno
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Susan Williams 24 August 2017

oh, my word. I didn't see that coming. What a heartache that mother must have felt- -yet pride in her unknowing child and hope that someday they could meet in a space of understanding and selflessness and generosity

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Nidhi Agrawal 22 August 2017

Lovely and touching poem.

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