Goodbye Poem by Rini Shibu

Goodbye

Rating: 5.0


Though you say goodbye
You are still near by
You are present everywhere
In my heart and in this air
Like fresh drops of first rain
Soak my heart and there you remain
Never you can go away
Like suns ray my love will reach your way

Wednesday, November 14, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: goodbye
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bill Cantrell 14 November 2018

A very lovely poem! Some say there is never a goodbye in love

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Bernard F. Asuncion 14 November 2018

Dear Rini, such a lovely sweet poem......

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Seamus O Brian 29 January 2019

This one particularly has power in it. Nicely done. :)

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Unnikrishnan E S 15 November 2018

Hi Rini, Beautiful poem on love and its eternal bliss... Quote Though you say goodbye..... You are present..... In my heart....... Like fresh drops of first rain.... So lovely, hearteningly expressed.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 15 November 2018

A sweet and lovely poem that captures the eternality of love. Great imagery and rhyme.10

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Kostas Lagos 15 November 2018

Beautiful! Just beautiful, Rini

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Lamar Cole 15 November 2018

This is a very wonderful and enjoyable poem to read.

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