Wednesday, April 29, 2015

Goodbye Comments

Rating: 5.0

As the sun sets down on Dublin bay its dying rays meets the cross of the Celt,
in Bridget's old churchyard where love once tread, dark shadows cast out a net to be embraced by a weeping willow,
final bursts of solar light end the day captivating two Gaelic hearts etched in bark pierced with a arrow,
a remembrance stone engraved RIP dies out in the light that fades haunted by ghosts from a past life...
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mike monahan
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Kevi Keego 14 July 2019

meaningful and sad and sounds like nostalgia from a relationship that had ended

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Victoria Christina Royaldo 16 September 2015

Lovely Irish lament. Full of sorrow.

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Fred Scott 20 August 2015

a real heartbreaker this verse, Celtic thru and thru!

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Edna Miller Browne 11 June 2015

Very nice. A Celtic romance that died. Great depiction Mike.

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Mary Donnelly 07 June 2015

Wonderful description of a relationship gone.

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Kelly Kurt 29 April 2015

A marvelous, enchanting poem, Mike. Thanks for sharing

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