Sunday, December 23, 2012

Goodbye Comments

Rating: 5.0

From the edges of my trembling lips
The word it stumbles, crumbles, slips
Heavy into the air, it hangs,
Then crashes down, a ton of bricks.
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Jessica Lindsey
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George F. Hunter 20 March 2015

Great poem, Jessica. Lots of feeling. I like it.

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I like and I love the words how to deliver every phrases, lines and stanzas. I rate perfect 10. Wonderful Kindly read my simple poems. Thank you very much

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Kelly Seale 27 June 2013

Captavating Write...had me fromthe start to end. Amazing talent Jessica! ; -)

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Kelly Seale 27 June 2013

Captavating Write...had me fromthe start to end. Amazing talent Jessica! ; -)

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