Tuesday, November 27, 2012

Goodbye Comments

Rating: 5.0

This is my finial goodbye,
from all the pain and suffering,
i built up all my courage,
even though i may be nervous,
...
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kali marie
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Kelly Seale 28 November 2012

The loss of one so dear, whose heartbeat I feel... whose flesh I touch, whose voice I shall here... Will haunt me in forever's mind., , forever's dream Tormenting me with stains of blood, and a river of tears... I'll drown from the flood. Do not leave me this way, No, not goodbye on this lonely day. Give me one last chance... I'm lost without you, lost without your Romance. -trying to come up with something that merrits a non-goodbye... not satisfied with it, but I wanted to have something to say on this sad, but excellent write... so it'll have to do... normally, I have a quick and witty retort, but this is serious business... a last Goodbye. : '( -Kelly.

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