Goodbye Comments

The poem always built by the hands of poet, and this is what you have done, simply by your heart thus it really fine in any way...it sincerely written and there is some values for this..and part of that i can say the poem was great and nicely written keep it up_Unwritten Soul

You must do what you must do, even though your emotions cry out No! I can't let you go! A smarter woman that you are, knowing Love's reach is way to far, way too deep. so now goodbyes are said, Love is not gone, nor is your love dead- And all you do is weep. -Your words compelled me to respond. So honest and true to your feelings. Very Good write! -Kelly.

Much better. Thee does not work as the rest of the poem is not written in that form. Love the made my heart beat a million times, need to change the dying corpse as if you were a corpse you would already be dead but the idea behind the line is beautiful and makes me want to cry. Samantha

Okay, so I changed it around some, hopefully this is better. Thanks Samantha for looking out! ! !

it is really different but in a good way...its a sad romance really painful and brilliant it tells exactly what you want to say thanks for sharing it love, payal