Saturday, November 3, 2012

'' Goodbye '' Comments

Rating: 2.9

Tears went down
Smiles were fake
That night
When you walked away
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Sham AlSaadi
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Sham Alsaadi 07 November 2012

Thank you so much :) I believe it has sad meanings as you said, I guess all of my poems have this kind of feelings, Hope u read more of them :) thx again :)

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Unwritten Soul 03 November 2012

I confidence that this is your sad story that push you to pour all times in and melt it into an ink then you wrote it with full heart as you had at the moment...and the product is awesome poem with packed emotion, complex feelings and such a determine to complete this long poem...but someday i hope you find a way to make yourself smile again..and able to rise like rose and fly with butterfly...the broken can be fixed, hope it do for you_Soul

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