Saturday, March 31, 2012

Goodbye Comments

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I stood still and looked at your beautiful form
Beautiful like a butterfly, fascinating as a lucky charm.

Golden sunlight scintillated your eyes in the afternoon late
Like honey dripping in melting chocolate.
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Isabella Francis
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Ben Burger 08 April 2012

The poem is brillant. It tells this short ballad of goodbye, one which must go through every now and then. The structure suits it perfect. Well done

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