Saturday, March 3, 2012

Goodbye Comments

Rating: 5.0

I feel weak, I don't have much time
My life has changed from its usual rhyme
I wanted to do so many things
So many places thats left unseen
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Neil Adams
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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 March 2019

This is an amazing poem very brilliantly penned.N o signs of cancer running through your vines. You must leave. They said the few months after you will leave. This is very sad, thought provoking and brilliant goodbye poem...10

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Sally Plumb Plumb 21 July 2012

I hope this isn't a true story.

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Neela Nath Das 26 March 2012

Very painful experience for a guy who knows he has only few days in hand.It is vividly expressed through the lines.If there is slight ray of hope a person can fight. Sometimes, he wins.Nice

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