Saturday, March 29, 2014

Goodbye Comments

Rating: 5.0

An old poet riding his horse at midnight
fell to the ground
when the horses leg broke badly
in a gophers hole.
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Smoky Hoss
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Cowboy Ron Williams 30 July 2020

It's better he didn't say goodbye. That would have made someone else sad. Who? The horse, of course!

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Juan Olivarez 30 April 2014

This one truly touched me Smokey. Excellent poem

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Colleen Courtney 30 March 2014

Very well written but so incredibly sad! : (

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Dave Walker 30 March 2014

A sad and wonderful poem.

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Valerie Dohren 29 March 2014

Very sad and poignant Smoky. I think we all make such errors in our lives from time to time - otherwise known as regrets.

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