Wednesday, April 14, 2010

Goodbye Comments

Rating: 4.8

My heart aces as I start to sigh
I`m losing you again and I don`t know why
My soul is crushed my heart is broken
All these emotions that were never spoken
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Vaughn Bekker
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loNeLY AnGel 29 May 2010

This is very sad and emotion but such a beautiful poem..... LoVe it :)

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Lamisa Fahal 24 May 2010

i really loved this poem! it's quite touching

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Crystal Bradley 21 May 2010

Touching. It comes from a place that I think we all can relate to.

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Deanna Charles 11 May 2010

I think this poem is amazing. It is very well written.

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Simon Tewolde 28 April 2010

Wonderful Job! ! ! You are talented Brother! congratulations that u discovered your talent! 'Special times we had together All those memories I’ll forget never ' well penned and touching.

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Cody Williamson 27 April 2010

Such a wonderful poem about lost love. I connect with these types more than any other. I enjoy your particular rhyming style. Great job, don't put down the pen!

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