Sunday, January 3, 2010

Goodbye Comments

Rating: 5.0

screaming in my face
yelling at me
will never change how feel
I'll alway love you
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Resa Lynn
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Chigemezi Nnadozie Wogu 04 January 2010

Good poem. It has good emotinal background.

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Cynthia Buhain-baello 04 January 2010

Vividly intense and heart rending pain conveyed in this poem. Well Written piece! (I would like to invite you to view my poem 'I Must Have Swallowed the Key' -it sort of plays part two to this.) 10+++++

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Romeo Della Valle 03 January 2010

Resa, only time shall tell, later on, you would look at yourself on a mirror and no longer see a distorted image, and you will laugh and say to yourself 'I was a fool', everything then will be cool....well penned, great, keep it up! 10+++

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