Friday, December 18, 2009

Goodbye Comments

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in the dark i lay
loveless and in pain
eventualy i become so numb
and i wish my life was done
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chris urbaez
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Nevaeh 101 09 March 2010

Hey this poem is really really good. it made me cry. my feelings towards this poem is that i can actually put myself into the mood and feel myself dying and telling the one i loved good-bye and tell them one more time that i loved them.

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Kerry green evil becomes her 09 February 2010

another great poem i love the darkness in your poetry

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