Saturday, December 5, 2009

Goodbye Comments

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You read my message
You don't reply
What have i done?
Can you tell me why?
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Tiffany ThePirate
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Catrina Heart 06 December 2009

Nice poem shared...expressive one! ! !

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Eyan Desir 06 December 2009

Awwww...Be Tiffany good write

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Jerry Hughes 05 December 2009

Well written Tiff, if a bit self-indulgent. Fondly, Jerry

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Carol Gall 05 December 2009

a request needs the answer feel frustration in your words 10

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John Knight 05 December 2009

Hi Tiffany - You wrote and so i am replying. We all feel sometimes like you do in your fiesty poem - I can see why they call you the Pirate. But I love you Angel - I have read your poem - I have commented and I have scored (TEN - because you are worth it!)) - what more can I do? Love you in poetry - JOHN

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Allan O 05 December 2009

very well written and the way you make a request sound so powtic is magic....thank you Tiffany ~^..^

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