Sunday, July 19, 2009

Goodbye Comments

Rating: 5.0

As you pack your bags and are all set to leave,
Like a mourning child my heart begins to grieve.
I can feel a deep aching gripping my chest,
As I know after this day my heart will never rest.
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Tiya Sen
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Ted M 19 July 2009

Its too touching, very emotional just to read this. Parting from anyone is painful leave alone the person who love. You presented it so well, with such flowing words and nice rhyme, though its not a happy thought.10+++

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