Goodbye Comments

ohhh. my dear i know just how you feel. very nice write. true in feelings and thought. nice work. Jen

That was pretty good untill the end. that was HILARIOUS! !

the last word made me laugh................good poem keep the good work up

a very common way of a male deceiving a female. He promises the stars, the moon and even the planets and the sun just to make the poor female to fall for him. After he gets what he wants, the smart guy is nowhere to be seen, he disappeared like a popping bubble in the air. Do you agree? Good work, keep writing. Thanks.

Resentment revealed very nicely. Good work.

The reader can sense your passion within your heart. Thank you for sharing. Scott

amazing and beautiful poem

i feel the emotion in every word. beautiful yet sad.