Goodbye. Comments

i really enjoyed this poem too..i love your style..perhaps some of the spelling could be checked as it can be a bit distracting...or am i being too picky? 10 for style though

another strong free flowing poem, you have found your stlye Neil, and you work it well, some great thoughts in this poem, especially liked the one about her not smashing up anything of yours before she left, the idea that she was now indifferent to it all, no anger, no sadness, just a walking shadow of her former self, consumed by routine. always a pleasure to read your work. best wishes, vincent