Sunday, June 21, 2009

Goodbye Comments

Rating: ★4.8

I look at you, a shell
a desolate memory of what you once were
the holes in your skin
fuel your demise
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Jacob Andrew Jarman
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Jaye Jacobs 27 June 2009

i think that it is a really good poem, it makes you want to read on, it also makes you think about it aswell.

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Alex Lewis 22 June 2009

You dragged me into this poem. Clever word choice.

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Suicidal Magic 22 June 2009

w.o.w i luv ur choice of words! very awsum XD

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Fernando Lachica 22 June 2009

I liked the way you constructed your piece, very original and has the power to 'pull' the reader/s to read all throughout. I listed this poem as my favorite. Great poem!

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Jacob Andrew Jarman

Jacob Andrew Jarman

Nottingham
Jacob Andrew Jarman
Jacob Andrew Jarman
Nottingham
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