Friday, December 26, 2008

Goodbye Comments

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You send me left
You go right
God I’m so confused
My trust abused
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Coleen Beverly 10 January 2010

Very nice Dereck..............

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Goodbye is so important because we can't enter our destiny until we exit that which keeps us back. Well done my friend.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 August 2009

walk out this door Goodbye chaos Goodbye pain Goodbye you ..........goodbye to you and never come back to me.. so beautiful poem with deep meaning.. i loved it....10 read mine go back...never say good bye...pain

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Dereck Gibbs

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