We never thought
It would happen so soon
So suddenly
That things would end
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so touching....very wonderfully written from heart... with wonderful, touching message so sad...really sad not to be able to say goodbye..esp to a person who means so much.. and whom you cant see anymore... but everything is according to God's plan......
they never are no such thing is goodbye...Just sad byes so wonderfully writing... but at same time it makes me sad! 10+
Your poem shows the grief in you, . i feel sorry for you. Good poem
Obviously one feels grief after losing someone special........and only a true person can bring these feelings to words........
You clearly showed the sadness of lossing one so close, and thoughts that followed. Well done. Also, I am sorry for your loss.
oh, if only you said goodbye, things would be different.This is nicely penned, straight from your heart.Take care always and God bless Love, Meggie
Very sad... and I understand the feeling. Deeply emotional poem.