Saturday, December 6, 2008

Goodbye Comments

Rating: 5.0

We never thought
It would happen so soon
So suddenly
That things would end
...
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Leslie Ching
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Haley Akin 12 August 2011

Very sad... and I understand the feeling. Deeply emotional poem.

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Miriam Maia Padua 04 February 2009

so touching....very wonderfully written from heart... with wonderful, touching message so sad...really sad not to be able to say goodbye..esp to a person who means so much.. and whom you cant see anymore... but everything is according to God's plan......

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Randy Hogan 28 December 2008

they never are no such thing is goodbye...Just sad byes so wonderfully writing... but at same time it makes me sad! 10+

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Aiswarya. T.anish 25 December 2008

Your poem shows the grief in you, . i feel sorry for you. Good poem

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Sameer Ahmed 24 December 2008

Obviously one feels grief after losing someone special........and only a true person can bring these feelings to words........

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Autumn Stoddard 23 December 2008

You clearly showed the sadness of lossing one so close, and thoughts that followed. Well done. Also, I am sorry for your loss.

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Devin Weseen 23 December 2008

Great I gave it a 10 Makes me feel sad though.

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Jessica Henning 21 December 2008

This is a strong write! !

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Meggie Gultiano 06 December 2008

oh, if only you said goodbye, things would be different.This is nicely penned, straight from your heart.Take care always and God bless Love, Meggie

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Leslie Ching

Leslie Ching

Toronto, ON, Canada
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