Goodbye Comments

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Such a sad but beautifully written piece! Well done, my friend!

Very poignant write with intense emotion. Our dreams lay broken our grief unspoken.............. a nice rhythmic write too.

Our hopes in tomorrow are now filled with sorrow.....Really we are in sorrow now. We have to avoid it by doing spiritual deeds. Very deep imagination, nicely composed. Many thanks.

A sad jaunty poem in awesome lyrical rhythmic flow. The word choice is very poetic. Pls do coment my latest poem too.

Our dreams lay broken our grief unspoken hearts cut open and emotionally frozen A poem of deep melancholy! Very moving!