Goodbye Comments

I love the simplicity and truth of this wonder...It reminds me of another ending to one of my first poems here..'Lost Chances'.....Though this one is shorter at least you got close enough to almost 'kiss' yet your end result gone, lost chances, like the ending of mine. Just beautiful.love, love, love it. love, marci.xo

Hello David! You know I loved it! You are a romantic at heart...it shows!

David have known many moments like these. Poignant feeling here. Wonderful write as usual. Top marks and thanks for sharing it my friend. David