Goodbye Comments

sad.......one......touchy...............beautiful.............

like this part.I saved a memory of you in a box which will never sheath. just so Wow! ! speechless.

My dearest good bye to you, while you go in sky. My heart is falling apart while i watch you travelling in heavenly cart. Sad write

I too say like Omar--so young and why such thoughts neways beautiful poem speciall i liked these: 'It's your time, this twilight's gift, so please, after mine, say your goodbye.' -10 anjali

how can someone so young sing words so sad... deeply moving dear

Sorry seems to be the hardest word, goodbye seems to be the punitive word but hey, what the heck...........life must go on.Nice piece Kite.

this is sweet but lonely.. I like it though great write kite... Krista