Friday, January 2, 2009

Good Vs. Evil. Comments

Rating: 4.0

when i close my eyes at night,
the war i just begun to fight,
visions of lights disappear,
and nightmares reapear,
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JOSE MURGUIA
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Penn High B2 07 May 2019

OML I LOVE THIS POEM SO MUCH! ! IT IS REALLY GOOD AND MADE ME CRYYY

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me poet yeps poet 21 November 2018

WHY YOU CLOSE YOUR EYES TO ALLOW DEVIL TO FLY SAY HIM GOODBY CHANGE YOUR SLEEP TIME

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Phoebe Soh Xin 25 January 2016

Shribling?? Is that an English word?

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hello 07 May 2019

Um hello have you never heard of that word? ? ? I use every single day and my kids and I love using it to describe things. I hope that you can respect that and stop attacking my freaking life! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Thank you and have a shribling day.

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M.j. Henderson 02 January 2012

this is a simple but nice poem... i can relate 2 this poem alot nd really enjoyed it: 0 never lose touch with ur gift... no1 can have wat u have: D

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Afzal Shauq 19 September 2009

a sweet poem and well written.. true what you said is really true..liked it and enjoydit.. wish you do same poetry...good fow of refeined vereses..well done 10/10

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Killing Hope 08 September 2009

Good poem.

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Miss Unknown Empty 12 August 2009

Beautiful piece very deep. Where I'm from we snap our fingers for great poems so I'll give this one 20 snaps Great job

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Luis Alvarado 07 January 2009

Good will always prevail over evil. In due time those nightmares will turn into dreams of good. Keep praying! ! !

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Thanks a lot 07 May 2019

YOU JUST HELPED ME WITH MY ENGLISH CLASS YOU ARE A FREAKING BLESSING! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Vinod Kumar 06 January 2009

Good poem, actually night and blindness better for us now-a-days, open eyes cant see the picture happening sorrundings to us, so devils and nightmares are appearing day time only. night and darkness are a better my dear

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Joseph Poewhit 02 January 2009

We all contend with good & evil every day.

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