Wednesday, July 29, 2015

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Rating: 4.8

Riding on the waves of sorrow and mirth
Traverses life of human if the sail is smooth.
Hurricanes n tornado with mountainous tides
No doubt to it capsize n it's doom they decide.
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Ratnakar Mandlik
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Kumarmani Mahakul 08 August 2019

Smooth and meaningful sail of any boat Ensures good teacher and his radiates.....outstanding conceptualization. A brilliant poem on teacher is astutely delineated. Visited this poem time and again.

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Michael Walker 23 July 2019

I hope that students thought I was a good teacher. You have come up with a precise sonnet here, which I like. You imply that a teacher is like a preacher-a brilliant idea.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 27 June 2019

Every human being, being an unique boat/Sails in the ocean as destined since birth/Joyous may be the sail or may it be tumultuous/Positive approach though makes it picturesque...touching expression! A great poem that invites me to read it time and again!

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Anjandev Roy 20 June 2019

Great write. Profound poem.Anjandev Roy.

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Manonton Dalan 12 June 2019

great poem i enjoyed reading it thanks

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Sylvia Frances Chan 10 June 2019

Fantstic poem, fascinating metaphors, I have enjoyed them and what they do and think. Powerfully worded. Really a treat to read time anf again. Smooth and meaningful sail of any boat Ensures good teacher and his radiates. Absolutely. Thanks for sharing this enormously fascinating poem. A true treat!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 April 2019

Smooth and meaningful sail of any boat Ensures good teacher and his radiates......true dictum. Most beautiful poem with impressive theme has been shared amazingly. A 10

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Mahtab Bangalee 20 March 2019

goodness is the radar of life need a pioneer, need a teacher as rider of that o my mother since my birth yes, i've found my mother as my solid teacher!

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Jennifer Birchall 18 March 2019

A positive outlook will make this journey easier. Wonderful poem Ratnakar.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 09 February 2019

A wonderful poem that depicts virtues of a teacher and a human being! Liked the second stanza most.....10

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Valentin Savin 09 February 2019

Well said: Smooth and meaningful sail of any boat Ensures good teacher and his radiates. I like it. Thanks for sharing 10+++++++

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Jeanette Telusma 04 November 2017

- - -Smooth and meaningful sail of any boat Ensures good teacher and his radiates.- - - a Great poem, written with truth.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 August 2017

A beautiful poem on teacher with positiveness. Stunning expression. Thanks for sharing.

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Randhir Kaur 16 February 2017

The title itself attracted me. I respect my teachers a lot more than any pen can say. But I found the meaning more profound in your piece. Perfectly drafted its meaning. I loved it. Dumping the sorrow needs expertise great..... Beautiful.

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Susan Williams 04 February 2017

Thoughts, if negative make it a trawler, Dragging heaps of grief in it's net.- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -That is a powerful image that can only come from a pen of a poetic and good soul

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Elena Sandu 17 December 2016

Beautiful, meaningful penning, thank you for share. I think the best teachers are those who can make a positive lesson out of mostly anything.

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Anwar Hussain Farooqui 11 October 2016

Smooth and meaningful sail of any boat Ensures good teacher and his radiates.

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Every person is unique, identify it and journey through the upheavals to make the difference, complete message to all righteous souls, thanks poet

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Daniel Brick 06 May 2016

This is really a comprehensive view of life, it presents life on an epic scale. It does not dwell on the small detail but wraps its consciousness around the bigggest possible outlook. Your poem is alert, earnest, humane.

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Norah Tunney 25 April 2016

Life is the best teacher Wonderful poem Ratnakar

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Ratnakar Mandlik

Ratnakar Mandlik

Hyderabad(A.P.) , India
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