Riding on the waves of sorrow and mirth
Traverses life of human if the sail is smooth.
Hurricanes n tornado with mountainous tides
No doubt to it capsize n it's doom they decide.
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I hope that students thought I was a good teacher. You have come up with a precise sonnet here, which I like. You imply that a teacher is like a preacher-a brilliant idea.
Every human being, being an unique boat/Sails in the ocean as destined since birth/Joyous may be the sail or may it be tumultuous/Positive approach though makes it picturesque...touching expression! A great poem that invites me to read it time and again!
Fantstic poem, fascinating metaphors, I have enjoyed them and what they do and think. Powerfully worded. Really a treat to read time anf again. Smooth and meaningful sail of any boat Ensures good teacher and his radiates. Absolutely. Thanks for sharing this enormously fascinating poem. A true treat!
Smooth and meaningful sail of any boat Ensures good teacher and his radiates......true dictum. Most beautiful poem with impressive theme has been shared amazingly. A 10
goodness is the radar of life need a pioneer, need a teacher as rider of that o my mother since my birth yes, i've found my mother as my solid teacher!
A positive outlook will make this journey easier. Wonderful poem Ratnakar.
A wonderful poem that depicts virtues of a teacher and a human being! Liked the second stanza most.....10
Well said: Smooth and meaningful sail of any boat Ensures good teacher and his radiates. I like it. Thanks for sharing 10+++++++
- - -Smooth and meaningful sail of any boat Ensures good teacher and his radiates.- - - a Great poem, written with truth.
A beautiful poem on teacher with positiveness. Stunning expression. Thanks for sharing.
The title itself attracted me. I respect my teachers a lot more than any pen can say. But I found the meaning more profound in your piece. Perfectly drafted its meaning. I loved it. Dumping the sorrow needs expertise great..... Beautiful.
Thoughts, if negative make it a trawler, Dragging heaps of grief in it's net.- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -That is a powerful image that can only come from a pen of a poetic and good soul
Beautiful, meaningful penning, thank you for share. I think the best teachers are those who can make a positive lesson out of mostly anything.
Smooth and meaningful sail of any boat Ensures good teacher and his radiates.
Every person is unique, identify it and journey through the upheavals to make the difference, complete message to all righteous souls, thanks poet
This is really a comprehensive view of life, it presents life on an epic scale. It does not dwell on the small detail but wraps its consciousness around the bigggest possible outlook. Your poem is alert, earnest, humane.
Smooth and meaningful sail of any boat Ensures good teacher and his radiates.....outstanding conceptualization. A brilliant poem on teacher is astutely delineated. Visited this poem time and again.