Good Start Comments
I wanted to open mind
For something to confine
A secret that was hidden
And not allowed to be out in open
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good Younis Rashid13 minutes ago Be Optimistic, , , Luck is a kind of optimism Comment +1
Good Sankar Karan, B.Tech, M.Tech(Gold Medalist/Jadavpur University) , Kolkata, India13 minutes ago Ending part of the poem may be improved.... Comment +1
needs more detail just my opinion Kimberly Rinehart7 minutes ago There are words missing and wrong words used. You need to edit it then I think it will b better. Comment +1
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Re: Good start (Score: 1) by Hira_Ahsan on Friday, May 02,2014 (14: 27: 50) Nice expression of thoughts...good rhyme