Thursday, April 21, 2016

Good Riddance Archie Lloyd. Now Rot In Hell! Comments

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By Stanley Collymore

Good riddance to bad rubbish I say; so totally delighted
that you're no longer here amongst us to shove your
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Professor Dr. Stanley Collymore
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Joe Bloggs 22 April 2016

Sentiment is conveyed effectively by the combination of poetry and prose you have chosen. The explanation doesn't interfere with the form. However, it could be improved by the proper use of adverbs and sentence structuring. I like the subject-matter with which this poem deals. It expresses a truth that needs to be expressed and is needlessly suppressed. What better use of the poetic form than this?

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