Monday, October 12, 2015

Good Old Time Comments

Rating: 4.5

My parents bought a car today
It's blue and green and red.
It's just the kind of car I like
To go full speed ahead.
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Paul Schroeder
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Chinedu Dike 16 November 2015

A well articulated narrative piece of poetry, nicely penned with lovely rhyme scheme. A nostalgic experience well depicted in the piece. Thanks for sharing Paul. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Kelly Kurt 12 October 2015

Sounds fun, Paul. Thanks

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