Friday, April 3, 2009

Good Old Friend Comments

Rating: 4.2

I only had one friend,
he trusted me till the end,
never cheated, never betrayed,
he engulfed my heart and there he stayed.
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Maya Hershey
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 August 2009

to me, he was just so cool. To kill myself, is what I tried, when I knew he simply... died.it is very hard to forget the death of beloved...indeed best poem from u....10 read minebidding farewell..boredom

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Afzal Shauq 15 May 2009

what i like in your poetry is the innocence of your feelings... the way you express and sure the words you choose for....your long comments on my poetry will be added to my new book..you can read my poem ' Peace formula'..' friendly smile' which is based on one of my very famous say...((a friendly smiles is the best weapon of war to fight with..afzal shauq)) ...and ' the eighth color'... you will like them.. I am sure..your detailed notes are really encouraging me dear friend...best of luck..here is my personal ID afzalshauq@yahoo.com, if you keep in touch too

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Yvonne Selase 05 April 2009

really touching poem. brings tears to my eyes. keep up the good work maya.

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