Tuesday, January 26, 2010

Good Ol' Fashioned Cry Comments

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Trying to be strong gets old at times
What I need is a Good Ol' Fashioned cry.

A cry for the little girl
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Lana Grissom
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Nikunj Sharma 07 February 2010

This is indeed a beautiful poem, a cry is what we all need for what has been left or lost behind. True, some old fashioned things never lost their relevance no matter how many moons tha man has conquered, , , , , Just check out the apostrophe in the first line in the word get's, I think it should be gets

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