Friday, January 10, 2014

Good Notion Comments

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Black and white hues defined life
in variable degree either joy or strife
fate is unpredictable so are our dreams
like water from rains cascading into streams
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Marvin Brato Sr
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Unwritten Soul 11 January 2014

The poem that have many values to appreciate and the value that i like most is inside this lines.. Time comes when existence is filled with burden it make us melancholic and our feelings are sadden discouragement overcomes us becoming pessimistic that we start to feel useless, empty and not optimistic ...later you bring lot of life scenario..and tell that how we still can win in life challenge..nice one! _Soul

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Dinesan Madathil 11 January 2014

A poem that instills hope and optimism and this notion you have advocated for is universally a fact that works on the minds and the human stocks. A fine sharing Marvin Brato.

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Marvin Brato Sr

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Davao City, Philippines
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