Let the nature remain sleepy,
when it awakes it eats the existing galaxies
and remains pregnant for millions of years,
no guarantee when it delivers the new one,
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An amazing graphics added, awakening colours! Enjoyed reading this poem and watching the cool colours, Sir! Magnificent choice.
Your most important lines, the key for this beautiful poem: But I doubt nature is planning an universe that will have no hunger, no hunger no joys of a food after struggles. So I think nature has done what I needed, and now I wish an endless sleepy state to the nature. Sweet dreams, sweet heart! Good Night Nature..............................Excellently captured and crystal clear. CONGRATULATIONS being chosen as the Member Poem Of The Day. Hooray for Akhtar Sir!
'Even if an earth is here, or somewhere. shall there be a couple, a male and a female, having attractions of opposite and passion of love, that ends in colourful fine arts fictions and poetry.' - Loved these thoughts!
Heartiest congratulations on your achievement of this honor- your poem being selected as the 'Member Poem of the Day'! An honor well deserved. 'quarrels for love, and love after quarrels' - these are human frailties but we live happily with these.
Once again, congratulations, Sir Akhtar for a truly deserved accolade. A poem of great depth that only you can brilliantly weave and deliver.
Some of the images that the poem creates reminds me of the latter part of H G Well's classic 'The Time Machine' where the man has reached a state where there are no problems left to be solved or no changes and challenges taking place in life. Thanks a lot.
If we do not 'Khamoosh basheed', we will no longer be alive to say- 'Khush amdeed'. Thank you Poemhunter letting me read this great poem.
Great. Venturing the deepest cores of the universe and the readers. Nature has given us beautiful abode to live and a heart to spread love but we are stuck to hatred and lesser things. Such a great comment striking the cords of soul. And Spacially that of the Urdu one. Well deserved poem. Congratulations Dear Akhtar Sir. Yes I should say! ! ! شب بخیر قدرت And to human beings- خاموش باشید
I think nature has done what I needed, .. and now I wish an endless sleepy state to the nature. Sweet dreams, sweet heart! Good Night Nature. .... Touching concluding lines with lofty theme. Beautiful poem. Thanks and congratulations for being chosen this poem as the member poem of the day.
What nature has abundantly in store is beyond prediction. After " an endless sleep" she may be waking up with a novelty that may be dear to you Akhtarji and for us too...10
Congratulations Akhtarji. So nice to read your wonderful poem. As far as I can see it is Us who will be bidding goodbye to Nature while she keeps on creating new galaxies. Of course with faith in rebirth I will be happy to be born again....if nothing else but to read poetry and polish my own skills.
A beautiful poem sir! Many congratulations for this fabulous poem being chosen as Poem of the Day!
Quite a thought provoking poem. Congratulations on being poet of the day!
Nature is ever a pregnant mother and Mother Nature beholds trillions of galaxies in her frame in womb. Our Earth is part of Great-Great Nature Mother and we call Earth as also Nature Mother. Sweet dreams are always associated with nature. This is very beautiful and you have written one wonderful poem. I congratulate you for your grand success. This great poem is very beautiful and a nice member poem of the day chosen.
An amazing poem of the day, Sir. Thank you for sharing such an insightful poem with us. Congratulations on being chosen as the poem of the day.
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I withdraw my indent, to be created once again, I want a pain and a stain, that I get in love of a fair, I don't want a life that never ends, a tasteless fruit that is not forbidden, wonderful poem and thoughts of after life and the life here.. tony
Thanks for sharing this wonderful tribute to Nature! Congratulations to the Poet for the selection of his Poem as Member Poem of the Day by PH!
fictions and poetry. Rivalries and duels, too, quarrels for love, and love after quarrels......fanstatic observation sir. Well penned.5 stars