Good Night My Child Comments
I see you creeping above to the sun so bright
Though you failed to hug the sun
But you came down with a warm sunlight.
I see you peeping out through the windows
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A very imaginative write with compelling imagery. Enjoyed reading it.10
'A suit with stitched diamonds'...... a beautiful phrase to describe the star studded sky!
I appreciate the comments of esteemed poets below! it's a beautiful poem! Thanks for sharing dear sir!
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7/28/2025 5:15:17 PM # 1.0.0
I know you are dreaming the speed of light! I see you sleeping in a suit with stitched diamonds Though you failed to kiss the twinkling stars Your smile says you're thinking, so good night! .......loved these lines. Beautiful poem shared. Thanks.