Friday, March 28, 2014

Good Night Comments

Rating: 4.5

I'll have you know,
I am not broken anymore.
It isn't that I've been repaired
Or even that I have healed.
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Katelin Taylor
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Valerie Dohren 10 April 2014

Short and succinct, but message well delivered. Very good.

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Khairul Ahsan 10 April 2014

It's a nice, well written poem. 'I have learned to live without the piece you took away' - This learning is a very important learning in life. 'I forgave To keep you from winning.' - Very well said. 'I am not broken anymore.' - Wonderful resilience.

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Sekharan Pookkat 31 March 2014

Determination of a strong mind can over come all sorrows in life

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Katelin Taylor

Katelin Taylor

San Diego, Ca
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