Monday, December 14, 2009

Good Night! Comments

Rating: 4.3

The dark veil's spread
The clock's tickin by
Stars shinin bright
The clouds are floating by
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Milton Toran 14 December 2009

I love the simplicity in this piece. Nice rhyme flow, no long or complicated vocabulary. Short, brief, and to the point! Good night dear friend! May God bless you!

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