Saturday, January 9, 2016

Good Night Comments

Rating: 5.0

a lovely night,
as the moon shines brightly
as the wind's mouth is shut,
but opens slightly;
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Antonio Williams
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Antonio Williams 28 March 2016

thank you all for your time to read and comment.

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Howard Savage 13 January 2016

This is a great serious poem with expressed emotions.

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Pietro 6 09 January 2016

Bravo - Lovely the senzation it reachs

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Ratnakar Mandlik 09 January 2016

the wind's mouth is shut but opens slightly; lazily not to frighten. to allow that cool rich breeze. Very beautifully conceptualized imagery and soothing too. Nice poem. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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