Wednesday, July 23, 2008

Good Night Comments

Rating: 5.0

This is a poem that rised im my mind three years ago, when I was in my 10th standard.
Its so simple but still I value this poem a lot because what made me to jot this three years ago was
the memories of my Grandma.She left me when I was just three years old.I don't have much pictures about her in my mind.
But I knew that she loved me a lot and I too love her beyond these words.
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Smrithi Padmakumar
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Sushana Vittaldev 07 August 2008

that was so heart touching. it may be go down the memory lane. good work

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Jun Insigne 27 July 2008

very inspiring poem, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , thanks

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Gone with the wind 27 July 2008

Very touching..the way all the things have been described...a contrast between childhood and teenage..the wordly wisdom..the love of grandparents....I loved my granma and when she died I couldn't even mourn for her..everybody was in tears..only me lay behind, locked up in a cave like room..I still cant beieve that she's no more..she's alive..for me Love Gul

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Kesav Easwaran 25 July 2008

good narration, smrithi...the last stanza is exceptionally good 10

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Sathyanarayana M V S 25 July 2008

Stunning description of the scene, feelings. Too good to your age. write more. with blessings, sathya narayana

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Smrithi Padmakumar

Smrithi Padmakumar

Kerala, India
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