Monday, May 26, 2008

Good Morning(Sweetheart) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Good morning
my sweetheart,
I've made you some coffee
(let it melt your icy heart) .
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Nkululeko Mdudu
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Ivan Donn Carswell 29 May 2008

Two delicious poems, one with a public face. Your impish humour shines. Rgds, Ivan

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Lungelo Mpatho 28 May 2008

wow, nkululeko! this very sweet; a pleasure to read. keep treating so- lungelo: -

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Abha Sharma 27 May 2008

Mornings treat with a kind gesture and advice… The coffee and flowers will unfold the truth soon…. the lines are quite witty and the rhyming is impressive, enjoyed reading it. Abha

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Catherine Rica Cosico 26 May 2008

cute poem for a loveone...Wish you the best

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WILLIAM SIENES III 26 May 2008

Interesting poem... it made me smile. To make this piece even better check your word spelling. Keep writing. Keep writing. You will grow and improve surely as a poet, Nkululeko.

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Nkululeko Mdudu

Nkululeko Mdudu

Queenstown/ South Africa
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