Good morning
my sweetheart,
I've made you some coffee
(let it melt your icy heart) .
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wow, nkululeko! this very sweet; a pleasure to read. keep treating so- lungelo: -
Mornings treat with a kind gesture and advice… The coffee and flowers will unfold the truth soon…. the lines are quite witty and the rhyming is impressive, enjoyed reading it. Abha
Interesting poem... it made me smile. To make this piece even better check your word spelling. Keep writing. Keep writing. You will grow and improve surely as a poet, Nkululeko.
Two delicious poems, one with a public face. Your impish humour shines. Rgds, Ivan