Saturday, July 4, 2020

Good Morning Rains Comments

Rating: 5.0

The blackish brownies in miniskirts,
Dancing in the air, the weather inverts,
The old sea smiling on the old sky,
Fly my fairies, flourish and fly,
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 05 July 2020

Magical and one of a kind description of morning rains imbued with spellbinding romance. Liked the following powerful lines, to wit; " Pacify the hostile heating sun, the bullets from the deadly gun." Another great poem. Onto my Poem List.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 04 July 2020

Open the locks of your sweet showers, Spread pearls on the on the flirting flowers, really romantic Romance is a game all can play as and when JA SIR

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