Tuesday, July 28, 2009

' ' ' ' ' Good Morning Onelia! (Tankas) Comments

Rating: 2.7

Day takes off her dress
hangs it on an horizon.
Naked now as night
her rich black skin glittering
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Dónall Dempsey
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Onelia Avelar 07 August 2009

Good morning...Day takes off her dress hangs it on an horizon... what of a wonderful beginning of a poem. I am lucky one to have such a poem for me. :) I feel like an actress chosen by the director to play the main character in a low budget production for connoisseurs in small auditorium :) 'Moon saying nothing. An owl doesn’t give a hoot. Scarecrow smiling to the end.'

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Dónall Dempsey

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Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.
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